The Mešvi language has expanded with Version 2.3, adding 157 new words and establishing a distinction between sacred and everyday speech. It now features 423 vocabulary entries and 53 phrases, enhancing theological terminology and cultural expressions. These developments support the upcoming serialization of the book "Immortal," reflecting deep cultural concepts.
Mešvi 2.2 Conlang Update Notes
Mešvi 2.2 formalizes three mechanics revealed by stress-testing: (1) Geminates—when compounding creates identical consonants at morpheme boundaries, both are retained and pronounced as lengthened consonants (bîn + nêf → bînnêf, "BEEN-nayf"); (2) Four-morpheme limit—standalone compounds max out at four lexical roots (class markers don't count), beyond which possessive phrases are used; (3) Expanded class-shifting—âšemân (sky) and darêkh (path) now shift between practical Mother class and cosmic/prophetic Crone class based on register. The update also adds vocabulary for space navigation (vacuum, star systems, nullspace), formalizes theological distinctions (qi/Darêkhâkh/šeib'qi), introduces five-tier religious law gradations, and documents poetic compounding methodology that uses source etymology to find culturally resonant metaphors. No grammar changes—just clearer rules and richer vocabulary for the Dark Dominion setting.
Introducing Mešvi 2.1: Language as Culture in Dark Dominion
The first iteration of Mešvi was Persian with centuries of simulated linguistic drift. But as I developed the Mešvi people—their matriarchal society, prophetic traditions, and goddess worship—I realized the language needed to be rebuilt from scratch. A language shapes and reflects the culture that speaks it. Mešvi 2.1 is what happens when you ask: what would a language look like if it were designed by a nomadic, matriarchal, and prophetic culture that sees the world through cycles of life and divine knowledge? The answer is a language with no pronouns, where names change with life stages, where the verb system encodes how you know what you know, and where the very act of possession is constructed differently than in English. Mešvi doesn’t just describe the world—it reveals how the Mešvi people understand reality itself.
Love in the Wasteland: Mikhael and the Art of Gentle Defiance
Mikhael was engineered to be the Dominion’s perfect weapon—a super-soldier who can teleport through combat and heal from anything. When they sent him to kill a rogue operative, he made a different choice: he saved her instead. The woman is Sarai, pregnant with the god-emperor’s child and marked for termination. She’s also the girl Mikhael grew up with and never stopped loving—though she doesn’t remember him. A blaster bolt destroyed those memories along with any chance of the future they might have had. Now he’s a traitor with a termination order, protecting a woman who doesn’t remember his name and a child who isn’t his. He doesn’t care about prophecy or revolution. He just wants one more morning with her. Reading time: 10 minutes.
The Dark Dominion Sequence
The child growing inside her shouldn’t exist. Sarai izt Kviokhi’s bloodline is genetically incompatible with the divine elite—especially The Name, the immortal tyrant who’s ruled the galaxy for three thousand years. But her impossible pregnancy becomes living proof that the Dominion’s entire social foundation is a lie. When word spreads, ancient prophecies resurface and Sarai becomes the target of a destiny she desperately wants to avoid. Abolitionists hunt her daughter for their agendas. The Name seeks her destruction. The only way to save her child is to give them what they fear most: a mother with nothing left to lose and an empire to burn.
When Motherhood Destroys Everything You Are
Every mother knows the moment she looks in the mirror and sees a stranger. The woman she was is gone. The woman she’s becoming hasn’t formed yet. In my novel *Immortal*, I explore that identity destruction at impossible scale—a warrior with amnesia discovers she’s pregnant with a genetically impossible child. Her body becomes proof that a three-thousand-year empire is built on lies. All she wants is to disappear and be a mother. But her pregnancy is prophecy, her daughter the True Heir to a stolen throne, and her womb is political property.
Dark Dominion: The Anointed Path
You were six years old when they took you. Cursed Anathema marked for death—until the Church saw potential. They implanted you with AI, transformed your body with nanotech, and trained you to become an Immortal: elite assassin, soldier, strategic weapon of a theocratic empire spanning 10,000 worlds. The promise? Die in His service and be reborn divine. The reality? SERE school—where aristocrats hunt you for sport and “training” includes systematic torture. This is the propaganda document every Immortal candidate receives at fourteen. Plus: exclusive excerpt from my upcoming novel Immortal, following a rogue operative fleeing the only life she’s ever known.
Psionic Talents: Advanced Theory and Classification
You’re fourteen years old. You’ve survived eight years of training since they extracted you from your community at age six. Now you’re ready for advanced coursework: understanding the four-class system of psionic abilities that governs tactical deployment across the Dominion. From basic pyrokinesis to reality-warping chronokinesis, this is the textbook every Immortal candidate receives in their ninth year—a clinical breakdown of how child soldiers are taught to weaponize abilities that should have gotten them burned at the stake. Deep worldbuilding for my Dark Dominion universe, exploring the psionic talents system through the empire’s own propaganda.
War Machines of the Dominion
Fifteen feet of digitigrade war machine stalked through the serf district, predator stance designed to trigger evolutionary terror. Then a matte-gray humanoid smashed through the warehouse wall. Welcome to mechanized warfare in the Dark Dominion, where three philosophies of violence compete for the galaxy’s future. SERAPHs: overwhelming force built to crush civilian resistance through psychological dominance. Golems: consciousness-transferring operators in nearly indestructible chassis, centuries of combat experience downloaded into silicon and steel. And revolutionary cells with Consortium backing, changing the rules by refusing to play by them. The question isn’t who builds better war machines—it’s whether machines can hold together a galaxy where billions believe a prophecy that could overturn three millennia of divine rule.
Beyond Human: The Evolution of Galactic Warfare
In my Dark Dominion universe, a smuggler dismisses stories about “destroying angels” as propaganda. Then he tries to double-cross the wrong woman—and learns that some legends are terrifyingly real. Welcome to military sci-fi where warfare transcends normal physics: bioengineered Immortals with regenerative nanotech and psionic abilities face consciousness-transferring Shellycoats who abandon flesh for whatever form the mission demands. Energy weapons that standardize logistics across 10,000 worlds. Tungsten rounds engineered to kill superhumans. Graviton grenades that weaponize spacetime itself. This is the complete arsenal of my far-future tyrannical empire—from personal blasters to orbital kinetic strikes—and the hidden arms race beneath it all.
Beyond the Margins 